Crimson Roses (triggers)

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by ThePhantomLady, Jan 27, 2016.

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  1. ThePhantomLady

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    Red rose petals falling,
    From this thorny rose bush,
    The cold wind breaking off another branch,
    This sea of crimson breaking the fall,
    Pooling at the roots,
    Only feeding the growing thorns.
    Sharpening the barbs,
    To keep the thieves at bay,
    Or must you all bleed me dry?
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  2. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    your poem reveals so much pain
    creates a vivid image of suffering you are in
    it is very well written i am so sorry you are hurting so much
    hope writing has helped to release some of the sadness you are feeling
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  3. booklovr

    booklovr Well-Known Member

    U write beautiful.
    Any more of my words would be a disgrace to your pen.
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