Damaged

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Greying, Sep 4, 2016.

  1. Greying

    Greying Substandard

    Abuse
    Misuse
    Bruises
    First on my body
    Now on my soul
    Grief
    Without relief
    Memories
    The past written
    In the scars on my heart
    Anxiety
    Melancholy
    Fear
    No silver lining
    Not for me
    Cracks
    In my concrete wall
    Broken wings
    So I’m sure to fall
    Damaged
    Discouraged
    Images
    Thoughts overflowing
    Mind beyond controlling
    Flashbacks
    From the past
    Again, brutal attacks
    Darkness
    Sadness
    Endlessly
    Losing my grip
    On reality
    Slipping
    Fading
    Back into
    Insanity
    Trapped inside
    Purgatory...
     
  2. Unknown_111

    Unknown_111 Forum Buddy Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    Wow, you are really hurting and totally understandable. What is the cause of this immense pain, my friend. We want to listen and help YOU.
     
  3. Greying

    Greying Substandard

    I can't, no more words. I'm sorry.
     
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  4. Unknown_111

    Unknown_111 Forum Buddy Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    No need to be sorry. You opened up in your expressive manner. Be proud of yourself. It's a start but we here for YOU. It will take time but take your time when you are ready. If not, then we totally understand.

    I respect your privacy and admire your honest reply. The wounds might be open and hurtful but you took a major step here today and in that itself is amazing. Let the crying pour out now as it will release the pain from inside.

    It will make you feel a little better that someone understands your pain.

    Take care my friend and most important be safe.
     
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  5. Unknown_111

    Unknown_111 Forum Buddy Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    Hi, anymore feelings today?? Take care my friend.
     
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  6. Greying

    Greying Substandard

    Thank you for reaching out to me. I wish I was like other people that can let their thoughts flow and express how they feel but I am not that way.

    You're a wonderful person and you made me feel visible. I hadnt felt that in a long time.
    Thank you.
     
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  7. Unknown_111

    Unknown_111 Forum Buddy Staff Alumni SF Supporter


    You welcome. Take you time and stay safe my friend. I hope you have a peaceful day.
     
  8. moxman

    moxman Well-Known Member

    That was a really powerful poem. Thank you for sharing it with us.
     
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  9. Greying

    Greying Substandard


    Thank you. I've been spilling my brain vomit all over the place lately.