Dandelion

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Expectation, Feb 24, 2014.

Thread Status:
Not open for further replies.
  1. Expectation

    Expectation Active Member

    Smoke dances past my lips
    head rushing
    I can feel you now
    your lips like satin on my skin
    your hair so perfectly golden
    flirting over my skin
    like snowflakes pouring down
    from grey clouds
    except you're not grey
    you're as yellow as a dandelion
    in the midst of a summer afternoon.

    --

    I really would like honest opinion on this, however harsh it may be. I have had writers block for almost a year before just now coming out of it.
    Its written about my lady, how I saw her the moment I fell in love with her. I was high when I fell for her, and I still see her the same way even if I'm sober.
     
  2. soulreaper

    soulreaper Well-Known Member

    keep on writing, it's like art practice makes perfect I had writers block for 3 years just came out of it myself, we are in this together *hug*
     
Thread Status:
Not open for further replies.