dark caves

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by forlorn, Mar 13, 2008.

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  1. forlorn

    forlorn Staff Alumni

    Day,cant you see the day,
    light cant you light your way,
    forgotten now as the sun goes down,
    you seem to fade away.
    you think you know it all,
    but the demons come out to play,
    they rise up in a rage and
    you sink away, to your shallow grave,
    you dont know how to behave,
    you are just a maze of dark caves.
    Everything you dont care to remember
    is lost to your dark caves,
    the girl,
    the boy,
    the reason'
    the toy,
    the hurdles that got in your way,pushed to the depths of your dark caves'the demons pathe your way,
    you cant see day,
    cant light your way,
    you wont venture from
    your shallow grave,
    your lost in your dark caves.
  2. forlorn

    forlorn Staff Alumni

    Did I write this crap lol
  3. Robin

    Robin Guest

    I think it's great but everyone knows I'm :loopy:

    I guess poetry is yet another proof of Einsteins theory of relativity, all depends on what you're on :laugh:
    Last edited: Nov 3, 2008
  4. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Member Safety & Support SF Supporter

    I likes it :)
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