Dark Thoughts

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by amis, Mar 24, 2007.

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  1. amis

    amis Antiquitie's Friend

    Thoughts so dark
    They near the end
    A life so harsh
    Without a mend

    Rape and torture
    ripped the mind
    tore the body
    and stole inside

    the shell is bare
    the inside gone
    stripped of dignity
    life can't go on

    into the present
    the past does leap
    with emotions freed
    from prison's keep

    deep pains of old
    from hurts inhumane
    haunting mind and body
    is there a reason to remain
  2. reborn1961

    reborn1961 Guest

    Wow. I really like that. Would you permit me to copy and paste into Word on my computer so I can bring it up when I like? Thanks
  3. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    I also like the way you express your feelings (tho I wish you didn't feel so). Thanks for sharing with us.

  4. amis

    amis Antiquitie's Friend

    I would be honored....thank you,
  5. amis

    amis Antiquitie's Friend

    thank you for your kind and generous words,
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