Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by ibetam, Feb 2, 2009.

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  1. ibetam

    ibetam Well-Known Member

    mist flows out in to the world,
    slowly, steady as a flood,
    the senses begin to drown,
    smoothered, muffled, aching.
    deeper, further, penetrating,
    razor threads snaking, seeking,
    seeking soul, seeping pain,
    snaking deeper inside.
    a force untouchable, unfearing,
    power numbed in construct alone,
    undefeatable, pitted forth,
    immortal to its own whim.
    only the wires penetrate,
    forever dies reality,
    emptiness is forlorn,
    alone, inside, they weave.
    they congregate, centrally,
    they swim vulture spirals,
    kniting themselves tighter,
    denser, darker, darker, darker...
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  2. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    amazing writing :heart:
  3. justafool

    justafool Well-Known Member

    Very splendiferous, in a subdued way. :wink:
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