Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by see, Jul 10, 2007.

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  1. see

    see Well-Known Member

    Darkness-wrote it 10years ago

    The demons gnaw at the soul take the light from the eyethe warmth from the heart the soul form the body.Then why? WHy should the body rise to faceanother day?With darkness in the eye,ice in the heart why? amidd all things great and wonderfull do demeond gnaw at the soul?

    As cold as ice as dark as the night as deep as the ocean the blade of loneliness cuts into the heart,chasing emotions of anger fear and hopelessness down the sides of the face leaving body and soul fragile and confused.
    Lost is the ligth that sihines troug the eyelost is the word wich runs trough the mind. cold is the heart as teh rivers run dry lost is the soul as the body dies.


    Words elude,emotions scream,death calls!
    Frustration prevails,anger rages!
    For amidst thousands loneliness surroundsand understanding eveades!

    WHatis the meaning of life, when every breath is stolen?
    When love is a concept so easily faked and life is taken from
    those who deserve and spared for those who deserve not?????????????
  2. Blackness

    Blackness Guest

    I'd call it 'blackness' hehe
    it is very good though...some of my fav bits:
    "blade of loneliness cuts into the heart"
    "body and soul fragile and confused"
    "Frustration prevails,anger rages"

    and that last part is excellent. :)
  3. The_Discarded

    The_Discarded Staff Alumni

    Interesting, original. I can gather the emotion.
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