darkness

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by thedeafmusician, Apr 10, 2006.

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  1. thedeafmusician

    thedeafmusician Staff Alumni

    softly sweeping
    fast beseeching
    begging pleading
    wanting it to end

    hoping, praying
    always believing
    in that glimmer
    that tiny little spark

    fading fast
    coming last
    slipping, sliding
    into the dark

    darkness growing
    without her knowing
    it is controlling
    her and her life

    taking over
    taking control
    consuming her
    dominating

    bit by bit
    until shes gone
    bit by bit
    until shes no more


    TDM
     
  2. Sa Palomera

    Sa Palomera Well-Known Member

    that's a damn good poem imo :hug:

    no words... :hug:
     
  3. thedeafmusician

    thedeafmusician Staff Alumni

    thanks.... :shy:

    TDM
     
  4. Sa Palomera

    Sa Palomera Well-Known Member

    you got some more to post? I'd love to read them!
     
  5. thedeafmusician

    thedeafmusician Staff Alumni

    Uhh.... maybe... depends on the mood I'm in to write stuff...

    TDM
     
  6. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    that was a good one...

    I loved it....

    BP
     
  7. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Member Safety & Support SF Supporter

    Lovely :heart:
     
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