Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Matt93, Apr 4, 2011.

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  1. Matt93

    Matt93 Well-Known Member

    There's days when movement is an impossible task,
    Where sunshine is still rain and thunder.
    There's days when smiling is just too much to ask,
    Where people steal emotion like plunder.

    Nothing feels worthwhile in my pathetic world,
    Colour just makes me blind like I don't wanna see
    Thunderstorms and lightning strikes; watch chaos unfurl,
    Like forests in hurricanes I am a fallen tree.

    There's days when tears can't even stain my face,
    So I turn to the blood on my arms.
    There's days when my feelings you can't replace,
    But on the outside I am looking calm.

    So when the pain turns outwards,
    It's like an incandescent hatred.
    They all laugh like fucking cowards,
    It will sting through the ages.

    The rivers from my arms run dry,
    And all feeling has left my being.
    I'm not coming back no matter how hard you try,
    You, I won't be fucking seeing.

    Author: - Me

    I am kinda aware it's not that great, so y'know... don't be too harsh?
  2. Sadeyes

    Sadeyes Staff Alumni

    Matt...this is wonderful, sad but so talented...thank you for sharing and I hope today has brought a little sunshine...J
  3. me myself and i

    me myself and i Account Closed

    Matt. where did that come from?
    Mate, you got to do more of this, absolute quality.
  4. Matt93

    Matt93 Well-Known Member

    Thank you J

    There's no sunshine here, not for me. Never. :/
  5. ThornThatNeverHeals

    ThornThatNeverHeals Well-Known Member

    Matt, your poetry is AMAZING, keep it up, hopefully i will heal your soul as these words helped mine
  6. Matt93

    Matt93 Well-Known Member

    Thank you Me, Myself and I! :D
    I wrote it in Maths the day I posted it. I was feeling really rather down, and could barely do the work due to it, so I started writing, and this was the result. Thanks dude :)
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