'Dead Space'

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by curtius, Apr 25, 2006.

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  1. curtius

    curtius Well-Known Member

    Flat and unleveled
    Neat but disheveled
    Soddy yet clean
    Stuck in between
    Touch me, just leave me
    Blind me with therapy
    Hang on but let go
    Why can't you just know?
    I'm yelling and pleading
    Untrusting and needing
    I scream silent words
    That will never be heard
    I'm right in your face
    Yet crouched in the corner
    I'm sat in the cold
    But I keep getting warmer
    I'm trying to reach
    But push you away
    I'm trying to think
    Of the right words to say
    I'm stuck in between
    Dead space in my way
    I'm stuck in between
    Twilight's prey...

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  2. thedeafmusician

    thedeafmusician Staff Alumni

    That is a very, VERY well written poem, better than anything I could ever hope to do, and I can also relate very well with what you are saying... I've always liked to read your poetry. :hug:

  3. Smeagol

    Smeagol Guest

    Excellent, very well written.
  4. curtius

    curtius Well-Known Member



  5. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    :clap: :cheer: :clap: You just keep getting better and better. You are truly talented and I'm glad you share your talents with us. I also like being able to relate to the subject matter so intimately. Keep on writing.

    Sooz xoxoxox
  6. "Twilight's prey..." (the place inbetween...)

    AWESOME! I'm a lover/fan/sucker for Irony and Paradox. Got my daily dose in your poem. (it RAWKED)

  7. curtius

    curtius Well-Known Member

    I was wondering if anyone would pick up on that...

    thank you again *blushes*

  8. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member


    put so many thoughts into my head...

    Missed your writing...

  9. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    :clap: cool :D
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