dear death

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Lentil Illness, Aug 4, 2006.

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  1. Lentil Illness

    Lentil Illness Well-Known Member

    dear death
    you take my
    breath away

    tarnished lungs
    sit cigarette grey

    distended liver
    delivers decay

    dear death
    you take my
    breath away

    and if in the night
    I should dismay


    dear death
    please take
    my breath away
     
  2. resistance

    resistance Staff Alumni

    Your poems always express emotion in it's deepest form and you have such pure talent. Take care, and stay strong. :hug:
     
  3. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Dear Lentil;

    I won't ever leave you.:smile:

    love,

    least
     
  4. Shadowplay

    Shadowplay Staff Alumni

    I really really like this one. :)
     
  5. Lentil Illness

    Lentil Illness Well-Known Member

    Thank you all
     
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