Dear sister...

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by kindtosnails, Dec 14, 2006.

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  1. kindtosnails

    kindtosnails Staff Alumni

    You know I love you, sis, dearly,
    But girl, you've lost your grip on reality;
    Seeing life in twisted view,
    Your glasses must be on askew!

    The past is past, it cannot be changed,
    But in your head, its rearranged.
    He's not a hero, please hear my plea.
    Can't you see you're hurting me?

    Why don't you remember?
    Why can't you recall
    When he had us pinned against that wall?

    I love you, sis,
    You know I do.
    It just ain't easy
    Making sense of you.
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  2. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    I like it!:smile:

  3. Had an older brother who wouldn't give up the "illusion" of the supposedly most superior being in our family. He committed suicide. So did the supposedly "superior being". Can't touch truth if you dont know what it looks like, or you deny the view.... Powerful poem...

  4. thedeafmusician

    thedeafmusician Staff Alumni

    I like it as well... very powerful.

  5. Sabriel

    Sabriel Active Member

    *mumbles*Holy cow, can I ever relate.
  6. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    i have never had a sister, but i can relate to what you have written...

  7. kindtosnails

    kindtosnails Staff Alumni

    Not to drag an old, crappy poem up again, 'though i have. But, isn't it funny, that now it makes sense(?), no, not sense, but that i understand. It wasn't her. That a tumour could make that much difference.
  8. RainbowChaser

    RainbowChaser Well-Known Member

  9. expressive_child

    expressive_child Well-Known Member

    I love this poem because it is powerful and also for its honesty. :hug:
  10. Darkness N Light

    Darkness N Light Staff Alumni

    Sweetie I loved this poem. It is a very powerful one. It is also deep and emotional. Thank you so much for sharing it with us. I hope to see more of your poems. Tak care and I love you. :hug: :cheekkis :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss

    With Love,
    Crystal :hug: :cheekkiss
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