Death of a heart

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  1. meaningless-vessel

    meaningless-vessel Well-Known Member

    Something I discovered id written a few years ago.

    Not relevant now so I think I can share it...

    When a feeling of love is beginning
    And so much of life is there for the living
    You will find yourself feeling elated
    If the one you want says yes.

    Sometime in the future you may very well
    Have a house, car and kids, on nothing you would dwell
    You'd find everything went just as planned
    So the love you feel you'd say is real.

    What happens next may surprise them all
    But the arguments begin because you dont call
    There's always excuses like 'just doing business'
    And a heart can always tell.

    You catch them in the cheating act
    Knowing he's the boss and you would be sacked
    You are left to stew on the worst bit of all
    The death of a heart that was once so full

    So why does this have a lot to do
    With the death of a heart, this is meant for you
    Just promise me one thing, to yourself you'll be true
    And you wont go breaking hearts, totalling two
     
  2. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Good poem hun wish you did not have to feel a broken heart
     
  3. Sadeyes

    Sadeyes Staff Alumni

    Sad but so well expressed
     
  4. BornFree

    BornFree Well-Known Member

    So Sad. Yet so beautifully written. Sending caring from one whose heart has died, hoping your heart will be soothed and healed soon. :hug:
     
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