death of a rose

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by darkplace, Aug 24, 2008.

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  1. darkplace

    darkplace Well-Known Member

    this rose is dying, slowly,
    each petal a point in time
    she has let so many fall
    only a few remain

    struggling to hold on
    too stay upright
    she is tired
    so tired

    the rain beats down
    she is broken
    she falls to the ground in silence
    she waits to fade
    the last petal has fallen
    her naked steam is all that remains
    this rose is dead
    she will never live again
  2. Datsik

    Datsik Forum Buddy

    I liked it! :smile:

  3. darkplace

    darkplace Well-Known Member

    ty hun was thinking about writing the sequal
  4. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Member Safety & Support SF Supporter

    Love it hun:biggrin: Thanks for sharing :arms:
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