Death Trigger

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Habit45, Feb 26, 2006.

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  1. Habit45

    Habit45 Guest

    I just can't help myself. I'm gonna have to stop writing poems one day because i don't like going back to the dungeons of despair to find material.

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    You torment me daily
    offer me despise
    makes me wish you could not free me
    And offer another surprise

    You offer me my death trigger
    I see your metal finger
    I'll just sit quietly and shiver
    with my prosthetic glimmer

    I accept the lies if only to take the pain away
    to give in so repugnantly
    To live without responsibility
    The rules do not apply to me

    Just Lithium
    and cups of tea
    I guess thats me
    really
    my own worst enemy
     
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  2. Habit45

    Habit45 Guest

    OOps, I must of got carried away there, I accidentally pinched the first line out of the poem by black_rose17 "You-Nameless". Sorry hun, i guess i was inspired.:smile:
     
  3. Isa

    Isa Well-Known Member

    I love the last verse "Just lithium and cups of tea, I guess thats me, really, my own worst enemy" I might use it in a song and send you a cheque when I'm famous.

    You have a beautiful way of expression.
     
  4. Habit45

    Habit45 Guest

    lol, I'm sure Kurt cobain and that guy from LIT will also want a cut aswell. Oh well, one's dead and the others in rehab so, c'est la vie!

    hugs and kisses from inside my lab sweetness :guitar:
     
  5. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    that was an awesome poem!

    Keep up the great work!

    Love BP
     
  6. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    good poem :arms:
     
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