Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by seronic, Nov 18, 2007.

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  1. seronic

    seronic Member

    This isn't usually my writing style (I usually have a story like feel to my poems). It's actually really bad compared to what I usually do... But.. I like it.

    Thought I would share it....

    Spirit be away
    By tiredless decay
    Iced freeze down my spine
    This endless pain of mine
    Slit the open wrist
    Fall into eternal bliss
    Fires of hell
    Where legions dwell
    Burning my soul
    Vivacity Stole
    Kingdoms turned cold
    Mindless drones set old
    Lack of control
    Greed over gold
    New order behold
    Gems to hold
    Minds to be sold
    Hearts now ready to mold
    A love tainted
    Perfect picture painted
    Death abounds to me
    Rest Surrounds my needs
  2. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    I like it :)
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