Deep inside of me

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by brokenandlonely, Dec 24, 2010.

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  1. brokenandlonely

    brokenandlonely Well-Known Member

    Do you see the world in which we live in the way I do
    In all it's nothingness, dark, depressing, emptiness
    Engulfing us before we even have a chance
    To make a change for the better

    We are put into a trance, a mental state
    In which we hold on to everything we are given
    In reality there is nothing, nothingness
    Nothing that makes it worth living for
    Nothingness that in the end won't hurt us

    Our very own worse enemy, us against this army
    Forming barriers on our own thoughts and words
    No freedom of speech, no speaking of thoughts or feelings
    How can you think they can suppress and protect me?

    Protect me from the world that cannot be changed, the unprotectable
    We stand no chance in a world full of chaos between us versus them
    We have gone to war, our own army
    Marching deep down, way down in the dark
    Deep down in the dark of despair
    Despairing nothingness of me
  2. me myself and i

    me myself and i Account Closed

    Its us agaisnt us H?
    Thanks for sharing, loved it. Regards Pete
  3. Sadeyes

    Sadeyes Staff Alumni

    Although so sad, this is so very touching..hope you find the light you deserve...I know you have brought it to many...J
  4. texaskitty

    texaskitty SF Cat Lady Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    Agree with J. Hope the light comes to you hun :hug:
  5. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    :rose:sometimes the light comes in unexpectedly with the kindess of a friend I hope your darkness lifts soon The light is there just hidden from view that is all please hang on here okay until it reveals itself again we will help guide you when you cannot see it. take care
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