Deep Reason *** Warning May Trigger Badly ***

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Bart, Nov 28, 2014.

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  1. Bart

    Bart Banned Member

    I think my time has come to go,
    When I often lie in bed,
    When I feel so very low,
    I’m truly better if I'm dead.

    My time is spent and I have no more,
    Wishing for an end to my strife,
    I’m saddened to the core,
    Now’s the time to end this life.

    Release me from my painful mind,
    Let me go to sleep and rest,
    You’ll understand I’m being kind,
    It’s truly for the best.

    My final thought for those I leave,
    I loved you all as best I could,
    In that you must believe,
    I’ve done what I knew I should.
     
  2. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    Beautifully written Bart. Thanks for adding the trigger warning for others- very respectful of the site guidelines you are, think that's my 3rd time in a few days praising you for that lol!!! Sad poem but written very well, thanks Bart, I must say you are a great addition to this forum!!
     
  3. Deadly

    Deadly Well-Known Member

    Have just read this Bart. I get what your saying totally!
     
  4. DrownedFishOnFire

    DrownedFishOnFire Quieta non movere

    I like it. Well written piece!
     
  5. Bart

    Bart Banned Member

    Thank you for the nice comments, all.
     
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