Deep sadness

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by ThornThatNeverHeals, Aug 21, 2012.

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  1. ThornThatNeverHeals

    ThornThatNeverHeals Well-Known Member

    It seems like nothing can go right,
    wont work with me at all
    everything is missing
    and all going wrong

    a doctors appointment down
    another two coming from
    the pain in my body
    is nowhere near done

    the agony in my head
    its too many times worse
    why cant you see
    how much i really hurt?

    it takes too much energy
    i dont want to go on
    i really am ready
    for everything to be gone.

    i dont want to try
    for the pain never goes
    death whispers my name
    i cant see a reason to say no.

    Im done trying to climb
    for this hole is too deep
    and i cant get rid of this sadness
    that lives inside of me.
  2. Acy

    Acy Mama Bear - TLC, Common Sense Staff Member Safety & Support

    Your poem really expresses how deep the pain is inside you. I hope that you will heal and begin to feel better. :hug:
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