Depression poem

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by midnightstar, Aug 18, 2012.

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  1. midnightstar

    midnightstar Senior Member

    (hope it's ok) :hiding:

    Black Walls

    The black walls of depression
    Close around me once again
    Blocking out the sun
    Causing another flood of pain

    There's no light to be seen
    Everything I know is going or gone
    Love is only a distant memory
    Although life has to go on

    The darkness washes over me
    Taking with it my light
    It's a dark world now
    Preventing me from feeling all right

    The world doesn't feel right any more
    It's fading away before my eyes
    There's no way out of this mess
    So I look up at the skies

    The sun peeks through the clouds
    Just for a moment pushing the blackness away
    Bringing a light into the tunnel
    Encouraging me not to stray

    There's just a glimmer of hope
    Something to focus on
    Light at the end of the tunnel
    It's always darkest before the dawn
  2. FrainBart

    FrainBart Staff Alumni

    Its really good, a very good way of describing depression. I like it :yes:
  3. mdfk79

    mdfk79 Member

    good stuff m'lady *toff *hug
  4. midnightstar

    midnightstar Senior Member

    Thanks person and mdf, have some :cake:
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