Desperate

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  1. Desperate...
    Surrounded and enveloped
    by a million moments
    Hiding in the one
    Hoping not to be seen,
    singled out for still more pain
    and confusion
    and too much responsibility
    Mind burdened beyond capacity
    Already hopelessly lost
    praying for but a second of lucidity
    Sanity…
    A harbour from the storm
    of a reality with no mercy,
    crowding into
    one so overwhelmed.


    FAL1
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  2. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    (((FAL1)))

    I know about feeling desperate - I wish I could make your desperate feelings go away.:sad: Your poem, like all your others, states your feelings so powerfully, so succinctly, and so sadly beautifully. I hope you're feeling less desperate soon.:smile:

    love,

    least xoxoxox
     
  3. {{Least}}

    The cry in the wilderness of my mind was heard
    As always, thanks from the bottom of my heart
    Your a real Luv...

    {{FAL1}}
     
  4. ari

    ari Staff Alumni

    sorry it duplicated for some reason

    ari
     
  5. ari

    ari Staff Alumni

    the feeling for wanting to grasp out
    dear one I have missed your voice
    having shied away from it all
    there have many tears in this fall
    despair can be shared,
    and the load not so heavy in care
    remember, words spoken
    the safe harbor is here
    mercy has been cried
    pleas have been heard
    the hope to be unseen is "lost"
    for I have "found" you....

    ari
     
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