Despicable

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by MoAnamCara, Aug 18, 2012.

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  1. MoAnamCara

    MoAnamCara SF Artist

    My mind,
    My body,
    My thoughts,
    My choices,
    My actions,
    My words,
    My heart,
    My soul--
    Despicable.
     
  2. tweetypie

    tweetypie Antiquities Friend

    you write so well and with such emotion ive read all of them now i think ..im thinking of you and hoping you are doing what you need to do to look after yourself you are a better friend to me than i ever was to you i hope you get to read this xx
     
  3. Sadeyes

    Sadeyes Staff Alumni

    I can counter this list with all of your goodness, but I do know how it feels to think of one's self in the way
     
  4. triedtoomanytimes

    triedtoomanytimes Well-Known Member

    I would have to agree with the above statement, I have seen nothing on these pages that has even remotely made me think of you in those terms. I hope one day you see yourself for what you give to others, which is beautiful compassion and caring thoughtfulness.
     
  5. IV2010

    IV2010 Well-Known Member

    Oh Mo..that is a sad poem..I wish you could see the good things we see in you. :hug:
     
  6. pit

    pit Well-Known Member

    Have you ever seen Despicable Me? The protagonist had that same problem - horrible self image. Luckily an army of tots saw him through. Anyway, I can relate to this poem every day.
     
  7. BornFree

    BornFree Well-Known Member

    Mo... :hug: You are SO NOT Despicable!! I know its hard to receive & believe but you are lovely sincere kind & caring Thank you for being you!!
     
  8. Jack Rabbit

    Jack Rabbit Well-Known Member

    Like the others, I don't see that you've made a case for the last line. I really think that 'despicable' requires sins of commission rather than omission. Good people in bad places need other words.
     
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