Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by MoAnamCara, Aug 18, 2012.
you write so well and with such emotion ive read all of them now i think ..im thinking of you and hoping you are doing what you need to do to look after yourself you are a better friend to me than i ever was to you i hope you get to read this xx
I can counter this list with all of your goodness, but I do know how it feels to think of one's self in the way
I would have to agree with the above statement, I have seen nothing on these pages that has even remotely made me think of you in those terms. I hope one day you see yourself for what you give to others, which is beautiful compassion and caring thoughtfulness.
Oh Mo..that is a sad poem..I wish you could see the good things we see in you. :hug:
Have you ever seen Despicable Me? The protagonist had that same problem - horrible self image. Luckily an army of tots saw him through. Anyway, I can relate to this poem every day.
Mo... :hug: You are SO NOT Despicable!! I know its hard to receive & believe but you are lovely sincere kind & caring Thank you for being you!!
Like the others, I don't see that you've made a case for the last line. I really think that 'despicable' requires sins of commission rather than omission. Good people in bad places need other words.