Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by derbygirl, Jan 20, 2006.

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  1. derbygirl

    derbygirl Chat and Forum Buddy

    I hate the way that i am.
    Prehaps things would be different if i were to disappear.
    The would be no more fighting,
    Everything would be calm and peaceful,
    Without a trace of negativity.

    I try to be a better person,
    But somehow it all blows up in my face,
    If only i werent such a horriblep person,
    We could be a happy family.
    But if i cease to exist,
    No one would ever have to know me,
    All the memories f me would sonn fade away.

    All i want is for everyone to be happy,
    But with me here, living and breathing,
    That wish cannot be fullfilled.
    Well this is my shity peom, I really do suck.
  2. Darkness N Light

    Darkness N Light Staff Alumni

    I do not think that you suck at all. It is a very good poem. I am sorry if you are feeling the way your poem makes me think you are feeling. If you ever need to talk know that I am here for you. You can lean on my shoulder anytime you need too. I love the way you worded your poem. Take care and I love you. :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss

    With Love,
    Crystal :hug: :cheekkiss
  3. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Member Safety & Support SF Supporter

    Good poem hun x
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