Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by FoundAndLost1, Nov 1, 2006.

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  1. I’ve been falling apart for too long a while
    I’m tired of picking up the pieces…
    My hands and heart too full
    for someone so weak
    no matter what I seek,
    I’m walled up
    Trapped inside
    Hands tied
    I’m vanishing before my eyes
    Oh, what talent, yes,
    to be able to express a slow death
    to concentrate on
    each remaining breath
    and examine them in choking minutia ~
    the suffering inbetween
    presenting for others
    the unseen torment,
    subject always
    to agony;
    In longest hours of the earliest part of day,
    before rising, there is no way
    to escape the wall,
    all of fear in constant Night’s hours
    holding sway
    in my mind
    And it shames and shakes me,
    in my lack of power;
    I don’t know what to feel
    except fear
    Everything’s surreal,
    yet so deep a touch,
    and total effect ~
    It’s all too much
    as I disappear

  2. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    No!!! Don't disappear!!! Please don't go anywhere - not permanently, that is!:sad: I'll hold onto you so you CAN'T disappear!:smile: Hold on tight to me, I won't let go!:smile:

    love always, your friend forever,

  3. ACRon

    ACRon Well-Known Member

    don't dissapear
  4. kindtosnails

    kindtosnails Staff Alumni

    I've read this so so many times i swear and still cant find the words to say what i want to...i dont need to comment. your words just say..everything.

    I'm..in awe.
  5. Humbly I say,
    you've quite a way
    with expression yourself,
    even as I die...
    I'm honoured,
    even as it makes me sad
    that anyone can feel as bad
    as I...

  6. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    :sad: :hug:
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