Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Acy, Feb 14, 2010.

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  1. Acy

    Acy Mama Bear - TLC, Common Sense Staff Member Safety & Support


    A stand of leaf-blown trees —
    They could be anywhere.
    But they, like me, are there,
    With you.
    A gentle breeze tattoos
    Your presence on my skin, alive.

    The haze across the water
    Mists reality, mutes what's true.
    But photographs prove
    That I was there
    With you.
    The fog lifts from this mountain lake,
    But confusion does not me forsake,
    I'm still confused, still dreaming lost reality.

    Raindrops - spring or autumn - are not the same
    But each drop makes me bleed a memory
    I can't assert, confirm, divert, deny, erase.
    I've seen this place —
    If only in disassociations with you.
  2. itmahanh

    itmahanh Senior Member & Antiquities Friend

    Once again so ingueniously piut out there. Damn you tellmeto critique can barelt type you afe evil someitmes just eeeevillllll. ai like tjat lol
  3. Acy

    Acy Mama Bear - TLC, Common Sense Staff Member Safety & Support

    lmao. I think it's time for people in nearly the same code to go to sleep. LOL!
  4. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Beautifully written your words are so touching
  5. plates

    plates Well-Known Member

    that's very beautiful acy :smile:
  6. ConfusedSilence

    ConfusedSilence Well-Known Member

    I see what you mean about writing from yourself. This is very raw, and beautiful.
  7. romy

    romy Member

    oh, you're so sophisticated! this one's wonderful. really nice!
  8. GreyCat

    GreyCat Well-Known Member

    This is good. I like.
  9. Randomlei_me

    Randomlei_me Member

    There wasn't a word or a thought I couldn't appreciate, relate to and understand. Thank you for sharing this - its beautiful.
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