Do I measure up?

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by latenightshopping, May 6, 2011.

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  1. latenightshopping

    latenightshopping Banned Member

    Do I measure up,
    Do I measure up,
    Do I measure up,
    Do I measure up?

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    (Obviously, it was somewhat of a challenge to get each line to rhyme, but I think I pulled it off. Also, note the SUBTLE use of repetition to accentuate the nuances of the commas.)
     
  2. NoMoneyToPlease

    NoMoneyToPlease Banned Member

    Yes,you do. :)
     
  3. black orchid

    black orchid Well-Known Member

    lol yes you certainly do
     
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