do me, not us over

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by eve1, Nov 14, 2013.

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  1. eve1

    eve1 Member

    not over

    i don't want a do over
    no do over ever went over
    - smoothly -

    not with me...

    i don't mean to be difficult, but
    once it starts with me, oh it's on
    - baby, it's so on -

    no amount of erasure, or magic
    will persuade my spirit to allow
    - my reeboting -

    of anything...


    once it started that was it, my love
    i don't want a do over, please
    - come back -

    to make love...

    to pick up all the little pieces, right
    where we left them off...

    :dragon:
     
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  2. soulreaper

    soulreaper Well-Known Member

    awesome writing
     
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