Do Unto Others

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by BattlingDemons247, Oct 13, 2006.

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  1. Pressed for time,
    Pushed to move.
    Taken for granted,
    Chosen to lose.

    Judged with fury,
    Abandoned in spite.
    Taught to conform,
    Provoked to fight.

    Admired for nothing,
    Rewarded with less.
    Beaten for fun,
    Convinced to impress.

    Dragged through termoil,
    Driven by pain.
    Enslaved by fear,
    Broken again.
  2. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    I like it!:smile: You're good at expressing yourself in poetry - please keep doing it. And thank you for sharing with us!:smile: :smile:

  3. 'Rather speechless after your words
    But I say to you,
    they were indeed heard
    You're admired for those;
    for the words you chose...

    I hope your healing
    begins with expression,
    and that your pain

    Let the journey begin
    Let light come in


  4. hottignorance

    hottignorance Active Member

    Wow.... That's a beautiful poem.....

    I love the Title! :)
  5. Thanks guys!
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