'Do you care?'

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by curtius, Dec 4, 2007.

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  1. curtius

    curtius Well-Known Member

    ...another day
    wasted by
    followed the rules
    not sure why
    its all whats in the black you see
    its all whats stuck inside of me
    if I had a bottle it would be gone
    along with everything else I've done
    tonight the fight continues on
    battles of bottles swallowed down
    the things that speak inside my head
    they wear me out I've learned to dread
    waking hours
    eyes will open
    left alone in my final moments
    groggy essence
    fight or flight
    that very moment
    that reminds you of life...

    take that breathe
    open your eyes
    and see once again
    that the sun still shines

    and do you care?

  2. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    "battles of bottles swallowed down"

    I can so identify with that:sad:
  3. curtius

    curtius Well-Known Member

    eh well...

    Im sorry - but glad to hear from you.

    The things it takes to draw us from our caves sometimes eh?

  4. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    Good poem C :hug: Thanks for sharing!
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