Do You?

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by shatteredsoul, Feb 19, 2006.

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  1. shatteredsoul

    shatteredsoul Well-Known Member

    I wrote this poem on saturday and this is what myfriend wrote back to me about it. "do you know, how much i love you? do you know how that feels?"

    here it is

    Do you,
    know how it feels,
    to lovesomeone,
    who has lost,
    all feelings for you?

    Do you,
    know how it feels,
    to have had your,
    soulmate,
    in the palm of your hands,
    then lose them?

    Do you,
    know how it feels,
    to wake up,
    every morning,
    and cry,
    because you're still,
    alive?

    Do you,
    know how it feels,
    to look in the mirror,
    and hate,
    what's looking back?

    Do you,
    know how it feels,
    to be me?
     
  2. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    that was a very deep poem!

    Love BP

    *your biggest Fan!*
     
  3. shatteredsoul

    shatteredsoul Well-Known Member

    thank you..i really really like it!
     
  4. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    I really like it!

    BP
     
  5. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    I love it :D
     
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