DOA**Triggering**

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  1. ~PinkElephants~

    ~PinkElephants~ Senior member

    Not my best in my eyes but still worth posting....

    DOA

    I was dead on the day that I was born
    Just be the look of a mother's scorn
    The hate and contempt she held in her eyes
    So when she screams and yells it's no surprise
    Over the years she'd beat me down
    Push my head under praying I'd drown
    Trying to purge the evil that she bore
    Ridding herself of a child she didnt want anymore
    "Dead on arrival, dead on arrival"
    "Sorry doc, no chance of survival"
    I was dead on the day that we met
    A day in my mind I'll never forget
    You stole a part of me I'll never get back
    As you unleashed your vicious attack
    Raping me wasn't part of your plan
    I screamed "no" but you take what you can
    You held me down and still professed your love
    These aren't the things I have been dreaming of
    "Dead on arrival, dead on arrival"
    "Sorry doc, no chance of survival"
    I was dead on the day I took you away
    When I decided that you couldn't stay
    A child in my life without a father in sight
    I made the choice. I didn't let you fight
    I told him the truth and he called me a whore
    Handing me the money he couldn't see me anymore
    I killed my child without a care in sight
    That was the day I gave up my fight
    "Dead on arrival, dead on arrival"
    "sorry doc no chance of survival"
    Sorry doc but there's no hope here
    I hope you're listening, let me make it clear
    She has an empty heart and no soul
    I'm sorry to say you have no control
    On the day she was born she was already dead
    She had an empty heart and no hope ahead
    "Dead on arrival, dead on arrival"
    Sorry Doc no chance of survival"
     
  2. Terry

    Terry Antiquities Friend Staff Alumni

    Hmmmm you might think its not one of your best (and yeah the English lit major in me wanted to tweak it:laugh:) but honestly its very good and with a bit of work could be absolutely fantastic..cos the emotion it conveys is amazing.
     
  3. Darkness N Light

    Darkness N Light Staff Alumni

    Kells,
    Wow that was a very deep poem. You said that it wasn't one of your best? I think that you are very much mistaken. I loved the emotion that you showed in your poem. It is a very deep and meaningful poem. If you ever need to talk send me a pm sweetie and I will get back to you as soon as I get it. Take care and I love you. :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss


    With Love,
    Crystal :hug: :cheekkiss
     
  4. wallflower

    wallflower Well-Known Member

    This is a really good poem.
     
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