Don't quit writing Tobes

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by DrivEthermissIon, Nov 16, 2009.

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  1. DrivEthermissIon

    DrivEthermissIon Banned Member

    You must remember that this is Suicide forum. Mostly everyone wishes they could kill themselves here!

    I loved your Don't quit poem, it's my Dad's favorite one.

    I know you love to write, otherwise you wouldn't keep posting in this section.

    Go on, keep being inspired.

    You've got talent, and you understand poetry quite well.

    So you are melodramatic. So what. It's not only poetic licence, it's SF licence. And if you lacked melodrama, your poetry would suffer for it. In fact when you added a bit more of it, it brought out some more life in your poetry.

    Give yourself a break my friend. You are doing fine. :hugtackles:

     
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  2. DrivEthermissIon

    DrivEthermissIon Banned Member

    Edit - corrected problematic words and caps
     
  3. Tobes

    Tobes Well-Known Member

    Thanks Chris. I might write keep writing poems if I feel like it, it is a good outlet and it lets me get a message across. I shouldn't be so hard on myself, but that's a negative trait I've carried for many years, and I need to shed myself of it.
     
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