down hill ride (rough draft)

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by solost22, Aug 11, 2012.

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  1. solost22

    solost22 Member

    I'm gonna add more to this later but I felt like sharing what I got so far

    Its gonna be a long long time,
    until I'm off this downhill ride.
    Depression, anger, and misery.
    Always makes me wish I wasn't me.

    Loneliness with my shadow its my only friend,
    sometimes I wonder if this is how it all ends.

    I know I’m always crying,
    crying that I'm always dying.
    But does anyone take the time,
    to see if maybe I'm alright.

    My mind is never clear, I'll always be insane.
    always wishing I was something I can never be.

    Sadness, its gonna be here for awhile.
    I don't even remember the last time that I smiled.
    Happiness and smiling seems so fake.
    An unside down frown is all it makes.

    Everywhere I go, I always feel the same.
    I hear the grim reaper he is calling my name!
  2. NYJmpMaster

    NYJmpMaster Have a question? Message Me Staff Member Forum Owner ADMIN

    Very nice - not sure what is rough draft about it- I enjoyed it.

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