drowning

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by amis, Feb 6, 2006.

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  1. amis

    amis Antiquitie's Friend

    drowning in memories
    blacker than black
    pierced by thoughts
    of psychotic hatred
    seared by the heat
    of pure evil

    sacrificed on the altar
    of greed
    given to anyone
    who desired
    ripped and torn
    for their amusement

    and the breathing
    becomes more difficult
    and with it comes the
    hope of death

    the only escape
    from the memories
    of terror
    that was reality

    drowning in the
    darkness of the pain

    amis
     
  2. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    that was a good really really great poem...

    Keep up the good work! :D
     
  3. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    Fab poem :heart:
     
  4. amis

    amis Antiquitie's Friend

    Thanks!
    amis
     
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