Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by ~Nobody~, Jun 11, 2007.

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  1. ~Nobody~

    ~Nobody~ Well-Known Member

    You are everywhere.
    Every man your build,
    Your height,
    With your hair,
    Is you.
    Little things,
    Things that no-one
    Could anticipate
    Set me off.
    Tumbling down
    Towards your face,
    Your hands,
    The things you said.
    I hate you;
    As free now
    As I could only
    Dream of being.
    Why should you
    Walk free,
    Whilst I cower
    And slink
    In high necklines
    And long,
    Baggy trousers?
    But too-big dungarees
    Did not help me then,
    And they do not
    Help me (!)
    I am a lost cause.
    Dead girl still
    (For now.)
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  2. RainbowChaser

    RainbowChaser Well-Known Member

  3. kindtosnails

    kindtosnails Staff Alumni


    You have a fab way with words. Here if i can help in any way. x
  4. ~Nobody~

    ~Nobody~ Well-Known Member

    Thanks guys :grouphug: xx
  5. I love it! I love it! I hope that you continue to express yourself in this great way! I'm here to help if you ever need me love!
  6. BelovedDreamer

    BelovedDreamer Well-Known Member

    Beautiful. ::hugs::
  7. ~Nobody~

    ~Nobody~ Well-Known Member

    Thank you :smile:

    Wasn't expecting any positive feedback at all - cheers :hug: x
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