dying

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by guage, Mar 6, 2013.

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  1. guage

    guage Well-Known Member

    For to many years
    I've shed many tears
    not concerned with any fears
    Trying ,

    Far to long I've done for others
    So many years problems for my brothers
    So much pain I've inflicted to many mothers
    Crying,

    Tried to become the man I want my son to be
    Fortunately this wreck he'll never see
    Maybe one day he'll find his family tree
    Sighing,


    I've climbed up and slid down this rope
    Time and time tried to cope
    Through the challenges finally lost all hope
    Dying,
     
  2. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Hugs toyou hun hope is there hun just hiding at the moment hugs
     
  3. poison

    poison Well-Known Member

    Reminds me a lot of El-P's "Smithereens (Stop Cryin')."

    Fell asleep late, Neon Buzz
    P.T.S. stress, we do drugs
    City air strange, sticky lungs
    Mayor Doomberg gives no funds
    And I'm cryin', cryin'

    Call out with a fiendish ring
    Broken into smithereens
    Every thing's exactly how it seems
    And it would seem
    That I am cryin', cryin'
     
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