Elusive Peace

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Sadeyes, Mar 3, 2006.

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  1. Sadeyes

    Sadeyes Staff Alumni

    This poem was written this summer, when, for the first time in as long as I could remember, my head was not filled with the voices, and my mind was not racing, trying to keep ahead of them:

    Elusive Peace

    Elusive peace,
    were it not that I just met you,
    I would surely think
    you were another illusion.

    Fleeing after showing your delight,
    I try to chase you
    through the chaos,
    only to find
    I cannot embrace you again.

    Weary from the journey,
    I have the fragrance of your serenity
    etched in my mind,
    as I long to meet you once more.

    I must find the voice to call to you,
    a whisper in the madness,
    and have you unveil me
    the gentleness of life.
  2. That really touched me :hug: Your poems are really insightful and special :hug:

  3. Sarah

    Sarah SF Friend & Antiquitie's Friend Staff Alumni

    i like that poem allot too.i can definately relate to that feeling of searching for peace.luv ya :hug:
  4. Sadeyes

    Sadeyes Staff Alumni

    thank you the two angels whose name start with S...hope you find it as you both deserve it very much...fondly, Jackie
  5. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member


    that was a great poem hun! I really liked it...great job!

    Love BP
  6. Sadeyes

    Sadeyes Staff Alumni

    Thanks BP..and thanks for being so sweet...big hugs, Jackie
  7. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    brilliant :hug:
  8. Sadeyes

    Sadeyes Staff Alumni

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