Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by shatteredsoul, Feb 13, 2006.

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  1. shatteredsoul

    shatteredsoul Well-Known Member

    Her emotions were like a rollercoaster. she wanted to be happy, but couldnt. She didnt want to be hurt by him. The guy she couldnt do without. She worried. Worried about what would happen. Tears stream down her face, and she doesnt know why. She is so happy, but so sad. She longs to ease her pain, but dares not too. She feels as if she is not alive anymore. She exists, but is not alive
  2. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    WoW! hun! it was an awesome poem!

    I loved it because I have the same feelings right now.

    Love, BP
  3. AloneInTheDark

    AloneInTheDark Well-Known Member

    Sounds like me.. just replace she with he and guy with girl and thats my life...

    Keep writing!
  4. shatteredsoul

    shatteredsoul Well-Known Member

    thanx guys! im glad that you can relate to it, but that poem was definatly about me!! i will keep writing!!
  5. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    I hope that you keep writing...its a great release from the stress around you!

    Love BP
  6. shatteredsoul

    shatteredsoul Well-Known Member

    oh god!! i guess so..
  7. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    it is....

  8. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Member Safety & Support SF Supporter

    Brilliant :D
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