Empty Sex

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by colt45, Jun 14, 2009.

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  1. colt45

    colt45 Well-Known Member

    This is a poem I wrote about the feeling of sex with out love and what you feel soon there after.

    The desires of the body are so strong that you are willing to do any for the needs of the flesh.

    And in the moment that can confuse the excitement, through passions as being love.

    But behind the ray of illusions is just a reflection the emptiness that will actually feel. Once the waves of sensuous desire settle; the dreaded reflection of the dark sky takes hold inside of you.

    It is nothing more than just a passing pass of the dark moon baring down upon you.
     
  2. waterfall

    waterfall Active Member

    A great poem and it's soo expressing really...
    i dont think anyone could have said it any better...
    :hug: hope your doing better...
     
  3. colt45

    colt45 Well-Known Member

    Thank you for your feed back. It was just some of the feeling that I have been having about my lonely life.
     
  4. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    I feel that way completely..you've written that perfectly!
     
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