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Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by forlorn, Nov 3, 2008.

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  1. forlorn

    forlorn Staff Alumni

    This house is dead, it breaths no more
    Dull paint on the walls, dust on the floor
    This house is dead it breaths no more
    I go the attic where the memories are
    The pictures of summer, cooped up in a jar
    This house is dead it breaths no more
    just ghosts and whispers and tears
    This house is cold, no warmth no more
    no smile, no joy
    This house is dead, do I care anymore.
     
  2. *dilligaf*

    *dilligaf* Staff Alumni

    thats really good hun :hug:
     
  3. ~PinkElephants~

    ~PinkElephants~ Senior member

    absolutely sad but beautiful in one breath. I love it Jim. :hug:
     
  4. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    Great poem hun!
     
  5. forlorn

    forlorn Staff Alumni

    Im not one to blow my own trumpet but I like this poem:wink:
     
  6. fromthatshow

    fromthatshow Staff Alumni

    me too :arms:
     
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