End of Days (In Color)

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Mordeci, Aug 18, 2009.

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  1. Mordeci

    Mordeci Banned Member

    The ancient willow trees,
    Make gray shadows in the moonlight,
    On a red stained river,
    That bleeds black at night,

    The white noise reveals,
    Yellow roses bloom out of thin air,
    And blue tears fall from my eyes,
    As the sound of my heart startled me,

    When I heard a noise,
    I thought it was you,
    Instead it was me bleeding,
    All the colors of the night.
  2. Acy

    Acy Mama Bear - TLC, Common Sense Staff Member Safety & Support

    Me likes! Good imagery - clever touch referring to "white noise". :smile:
  3. Mordeci

    Mordeci Banned Member

    Thanks i am really proud of this one :biggrin:
  4. Remedy

    Remedy Chat & Forum Buddy

    Beautiful poem. :)
  5. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    Great poem :)
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