Entering Heaven (my poem)

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Tears_of_blood, Jan 18, 2007.

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  1. Tears_of_blood

    Tears_of_blood Well-Known Member

    :wiggle: When it rains when I cry
    When I wonder where you are
    When I wonder what’s wrong with the sky
    When it happens to me
    When I finally realise
    The answers I couldn’t see enter the light
    It hits me the fact that I’m about to die
    And I can’t stop it I can’t stop what’s going to happen
    And this crushing bright light is falling down
    Down on me don’t you see?
    This pain for me it’s just a game
    But for you this is totally true.
     
  2. physician

    physician Well-Known Member

    Bravo! :cool:
    an incredible poem!
     
  3. Tears_of_blood

    Tears_of_blood Well-Known Member

    tnx for that lol it aint that great :p
     
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