Entering Heaven (my poem)

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Tears_of_blood, Jan 18, 2007.

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  1. Tears_of_blood

    Tears_of_blood Well-Known Member

    When it rains when I cry
    When I wonder where you are
    When I wonder what’s wrong with the sky
    When it happens to me
    When I finally realise
    The answers I couldn’t see enter the light
    It hits me the fact that I’m about to die
    And I can’t stop it I can’t stop what’s going to happen
    And this crushing bright light is falling down
    Down on me don’t you see?
    This pain for me it’s just a game
    But for you this is totally true.
  2. Sadeyes

    Sadeyes Staff Alumni

    I am so sorry you are hurting as you are; your words are powerful and direct...they show what it is like to loose a part of one's self when a relationship has ended...please keep fighting for yourself this time...you are so talented...and we never have too much talent in this world...big hugs, Jackie
  3. Tears_of_blood

    Tears_of_blood Well-Known Member

    tnx for that i had never thought of my words as powerful and direct i suppose thats because they come naturally to me and i dont consider them much
  4. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    what a great poem hun!!!
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