~ Erased ~

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by A.SoNiC.boY, Mar 2, 2011.

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  1. A.SoNiC.boY

    A.SoNiC.boY Well-Known Member

    ~ Erased ~

    I am so easily erased
    So quickly replaced
    Stain treated
    Left out to dry
    As I sit here I ponder
    Why me? Why was I laundered?
    I am gone, a stain removed
    Forever left, nothing to prove.
    I have any intrinsic value
    left to you
  2. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    well written sometimes that is what i feel like too a stain hugs
  3. Sadeyes

    Sadeyes Staff Alumni

    As TE said, I do know how this feels as well...thank you for putting into words things I have felt often...J
  4. Julia-C

    Julia-C Well-Known Member

    It isn't a good feeling to feel easily replaceable.

    Feeling as if your value is as worthless as a stain. Something to be removed and forgotten about.

    In those times we feel so thoughtlessly dis-guarded. We often wonder what did I do wrong? Where did I mess up? How could they be so heartless and do that to me? Maybe I deserved to be tossed like trash?

    When that dream of FOREVER, that dream of a life long relationship is removed. You feel removed from the world, your world, their life. Makes you feel like bad luck and depression has nothing left to prove.

    We always wonder if we still have meaning to them? Do they care, did they ever care?

    I enjoyed reading this poem very much. I can very easily personalize with it. Thank you so much for sharing. :smile:
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