Erosion (Haiku verses)

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Acy, Oct 22, 2009.

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  1. Acy

    Acy Mama Bear - TLC, Common Sense Staff Member Safety & Support

    Erosion

    Mere rainwater wears
    away the highest mountains.
    Words erode my soul.

    Broken mountain rock
    can fall and smash to powder.
    Some words crush others.

    Those things that wear down
    mountains or men themselves
    use no reason, nor care.

    What can be broken
    is broken, shattered; no more;
    I’m different now.
     
  2. shades

    shades Staff Alumni

    It's incredibly beautiful Acy.
     
  3. Acy

    Acy Mama Bear - TLC, Common Sense Staff Member Safety & Support

    You're very kind. Thank you.
     
  4. itmahanh

    itmahanh Senior Member & Antiquities Friend

    Your words are always so powerful. Quite a talent you possess hun. :arms:
     
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