Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by nevergoodenough, Jan 10, 2006.

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  1. She looked down from the mountaintop
    Wanting desperately to leap off..
    Wanting to fly..
    To spread her arms and just fall.

    Not a care in the world.
    Not a soul to care for..
    No one to care for her..
    No one left to understand her..
    No one to listen to her pleas..

    Pleas of sorrow, Pleas of pain..
    Head hurting so bad..
    Eyes swollen shut..
    Not a tear left in her to shed.

    Free....She will be free
    Fly away little girl..

    And be free.
  2. Pills

    Pills Well-Known Member

    I really like the last three lines. Great poem. Take care.
  3. Thank you, I am glad that you liked it.
  4. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Member Safety & Support SF Supporter

    great writing!
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