Excepting Reality

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Julia-C, Feb 13, 2011.

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  1. Julia-C

    Julia-C Well-Known Member

    I wrote this in December. I was going through a bad time. I am better. I say that so no one worries, and because it isn't me anymore. I also want to share so people know they are not alone.

    I’m tired of pretending,
    Pretending to be what I’m not.
    Hiding in a fake shell,
    Playing the roll of a robot.

    Crunching the numbers,
    of other’s designed program.
    Following a set of instructions,
    When all I want to do is frown.

    I thought this fake persona,
    Would somehow hold me together.
    Now I know it was all in vain,
    And I’ll not be the same no not ever.

    I should just except reality,
    And submit my life is doomed.
    Grab a hold someone's gun,
    And let it go boom.

    May I R.I.P.
  2. Lilly

    Lilly Well-Known Member

    I like the line about the robot. Its a strong line, and stands out a lot.
    All in all its a wonderful piece of work ^_^ <3
  3. Julia-C

    Julia-C Well-Known Member

    Thank you :) Lilly
  4. Lilly

    Lilly Well-Known Member

    yw <3
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