explanation

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by GreyCat, Mar 25, 2011.

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  1. GreyCat

    GreyCat Well-Known Member

    My blunt tongue
    My words sweep the conversation like a scythe
    Trying to be nice
    My eyes are full of storm clouds
    and I don't put people at ease,
    but it's just the colour of my eyes,
    and the language that I speak.
    I cannot bare my soul
    without causing offence
    But none of this is intentional
    I was just born intense.
     
  2. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Love that poem love the ending especially h ugs
     
  3. GreyCat

    GreyCat Well-Known Member

    Thank you, Eclipse. I came back and read this and I think it's possibly the most accurate description I could give of myself. Happy with it!!!
     
  4. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    I think it describes many people here we can be very intense i love it hugs
     
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