Expressed At Last...

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by A.SoNiC.boY, Aug 19, 2012.

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  1. A.SoNiC.boY

    A.SoNiC.boY Well-Known Member

    - Dreamer Eternal -​

    So now you dream forever from two yards under me.
    I bought a bottle the other night, just to see..
    If I could forget about the strife and guilt left behind.
    Only to discover I'd bought your brand, just not the same kind.
    A waitress with your name, not too long ago..
    Brought it up again, though I was able to remain composed.
    I didn't help, I didn't believe, and now I've come to see..
    Despite my best efforts to create distance, it hit home just as hard for me.
    With an added guilt on top, the stack grows tall..
    So here's to you, down below it all.​
  2. ThornThatNeverHeals

    ThornThatNeverHeals Well-Known Member

    extremely beautifully written!
  3. Lps

    Lps Well-Known Member

    Hey, this is really great. So good you're speaking what's on your insides. And "screaming obscenities" hahahah. It's gotta be done!!
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