fadeing puppies

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  1. cinZamurai

    cinZamurai Well-Known Member

    I stand before two pillars of white marmor in a dense forest.

    moss, green leaves a subtle wind. Rocks stackt in pyramids forms, markings leading up to a cave up the trail.

    dense air, chill, a moist and shadows smoothing the soul.

    Something alive.

    A heartbeat so strong in the mist.
    The smell of fresh camomile.

    A Light explodes and cast the big shadows on too the walls. The fumes from burning oil and wood makes its way to the nostrils. A vast space , dripping stones and the vain of the cave, a creak of mineral water, tasting of stone and moss. Wild like the forgotten heart.

    The voice from hundred of blind furballs making its way out in to the starlight in the cool night.

    And then it was only the two

    something was holding its breath
    the heart betrayed it
    it was beating so hard, like a drum.

    deep within the body of stone and darkness
    the light shines on a pale being

    entity dare not look
    eyes are closed tight

    I felt an old wisdom entrapped in this soul
    carefully I squat down beside to listen

    -You do not see.
    -Why do you not see?

    -I do not see
    what I do not believe
    -So I can not look

    -you have no heart
    -no lungs
    -no body
    -no eyes

    -all you have is a tiny bell,
    you play it when you walk in the shadows, coming closer and closer.

    -You can not be
    -and still here you are at the side of a dieing being,

    Have you come here to watch me die?

    -The ghost you are talking about is from your past
    she was a mother once, it is not aye
    her instinct do not end easy, not even death claimed it
    your fear awakened her to you

    -I am at the end of your passing
    trying to understand who you are

    -I am in this dark cave full of shadows,but with my light to bring you comfort as your own torch is fading.

    -I am looking at your face, your closed eyes, your fear. wish I could shatter the fear
    wish your eyes would open

    -But I have found you,
    fading puppie.

    I have found you

  2. sudut

    sudut Well-Known Member

    thanks for this.
  3. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Member Safety & Support SF Supporter

    thanks for sharing :hug:
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